Wednesday, January 14, 2015

Roller Coaster Ride


hold breath,
Get on,
Buckle Up,
Wheels Shifting,
rise, rise,
speed is the pain,
sharp wind in imagination


hands forms a hammer,
almost too dizzy
to feel the height

at the cloud's arm,
the world stops breathing,
eye closing,
a pause, then

whoosh!
sharp wind in ears,
the weight is losing,
gravity, heartbeats, drum alike,
down, down,
all the way,
then, a sudden halt,
all is over
when the roller coaster hits the floor.




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23 comments:

  1. life must stop one day-wonderful analogy

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  2. Yikes. Tummy turning. great imagery.

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  3. Good one. I like how you describe the ride in micro details. I had written about about same topic but with a different take (here's link if you want to check it out: http://lordemmanuel.me/2014/12/05/roller-coaster/).

    Cheers!

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  4. a good write on a roller coaster ride feel,
    sweet and thrilling like orange peel.

    way to go.

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  5. Madcap, fast paced and thrilling -- j:))

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